Watching the sun arise,
Sitting right beside you...
Two beautiful eyes
Steal away all I view.
Florescents have painted the sky,
And dawn's breath kisses our skin...
Such perfection you could cry,
But we just cuddle and grin.
Author notes
This is just a shoty...
It portrays how I wish to spend the rest of my life with one special girl.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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It's sooooooo sweet and I love it! I'm so glad I read it this morning!


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Aw, this such a sweet, romantic write. Beautiful imagery, wonderful expression of emotion and great flow. Whoever your special girl is, from the poem, it sounds like she's very lucky to have you. Keep writing.

