Seeing your face makes me quiver.
Hate caresses my insides,
With fear that somehow
I'll take you.
Strangle you.
Rip your insides to make mine feel better.
That smile I despise
can simply arise
and before you notice
I'll be cutting you with hate.
Don't blame me,
Blame FATE.
You snake,
witch.
slut.
b****.
stupid f*ck.
I faced my fear.
I smile as I see your limp body in your grave.
My eyes wander through the joy of seeing your dead flesh.
This hate that devours me is odd....
Maybe because
I hate you
like the devil hates god.
Author notes
Well....I'm really not a hateful person, but you really got me going on this one. Fun to write
I had a change of personality for a moment. So this hate is directed more towards a person, obviously. I hope you like it, though it's not all that.
Thanks for posting the contest. Much love.
A contest entry
- HATE by lesbian-in-love.
565 points, ended November 5, 2007, 47 entries
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Intense!
Feel kinda creeped out right now. The hatred is palpable.
The imagery is so real. I can see the frightened scene playing out! Eeek. I have to go. This was a hard read for me. I'm very emotional & well..hate is hate! I love the last line. That says it all! Good job.
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aw. thanks! don't be creeped out! its not real. haha. well, thanks for reading. Much appreciated.
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You're Funny!
BTW. I like that pix. Very cute Sarah. Are you the cake? LOL. -
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Thanks! I was bored hehe. and well, the name started out as a joke.... Sarah Lee Cake....then ppl started dropping the cake. My real name is Sarai. Well, enjoy the weekend!
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Wow very moving piece. I have gotten such fine pieces for this one. Thank you for entering and good luck in th contest.
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Glad you liked it
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