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When and Why?

Will I ever get past this pain?
Will I ever be happy again?
Why can't I ever smile?
When will someone make me feel worthwhile?
When will I ever hear"I love you" first?
When will I ever not be cursed?
Why do I always have to cry?
When all I do is try.
Why can't I enjoy life sometime?
When after all it is suppose to be mine.
Why is everything in my life always the same?
Why LORD so much pain???

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  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    October 17, 2007

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    So much pain and questioning in this piece. Full of emotion and passion. Wonderful writing. There is always 'HOPE' You must believe in that.

    All the best
    Wayne
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    • luvpoems32
      October 21, 2007
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      I just stopped by to say hello. If you get the chance check out my two new poems. Their titles are "Moving On and "Husband." Let me know what you think,THANKS!