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Glowing Lights

The night sky is painted black
and the street lights have come on
They shine around the neighborhood

while my mind wanders off

 

I think to myself about those lights

For its like myself sometimes

Cause I love the night when the lights come on

and its as if that i am thinking

 The street lights are the signals of my heart

For they paint a picture in my mind

of glowing hearts around the world 

 

I love the beauty of the shining street candles

For I enjoy them and my heart sings and rejoices

and makes noises when i sleep of all the glowing lights

And at night I always sleep with a smile cause the lights

of my heart glow in the night for i love it so much 

Author notes

i am 9 years old.Did you like the poem? i dont know if it was real good.

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    November 11, 2007

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    This is a great piece. I love the "real" feel of life emanating here and that it is so person to you (relating to your feelings). Excellent work on this piece.


  • Dancing the Rumba
    October 29, 2007

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    Beautiful!

    Wonderful, work on your spelling and grammer, but otherwise,GREAT job, and good luck in the contest!


  • Little Sam
    October 22, 2007

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    WOW I wish I could write like that and I am twelve.
    I like how you call street lights candles.
    I enjoyed your poem very much.
    little sam

  • no-knowing
    October 16, 2007
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    very well written!

    Can feel the night,the glowing lights and the heart smile.