You look into my eyes
And I fake a beautiful smile
But my broken heart cries
As the unspoken words start to pile
You say that you love me
Always saying it in return
Lust is all I can see
For to be with me is what you yearn
Words in that growing pile
You do not really understand
they are me in denial
This is not something I would have planned
We cant be together
Because of the way I’ve lied
Never getting better
It just did not work but we have tried
A contest entry
- Unspoken Words. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended October 18, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make me cry, laugh, and wish for more by dreamfinder.
520 points, ended October 19, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Yea... this one is full of emotion & truth. Great job, I really got it. Good luck
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Woah! this is beautiful.
I love it.
xx

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Thank you for your heartfelt entry,and one I can relate to also, Josephine


