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Lies Unspoken

You look into my eyes
And I fake a beautiful smile
But my broken heart cries
As the unspoken words start to pile

You say that you love me
Always saying it in return
Lust is all I can see
For to be with me is what you yearn

Words in that growing pile
You do not really understand
they are me in denial
This is not something I would have planned

We cant be together
Because of the way I’ve lied
Never getting better
It just did not work but we have tried

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  • dreamfinder
    October 18, 2007
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    Yea... this one is full of emotion & truth. Great job, I really got it. Good luck


  • Holley-Anne
    October 18, 2007
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    Woah! this is beautiful.
    I love it.
    xx

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    October 16, 2007
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    Thank you for your heartfelt entry,and one I can relate to also, Josephine