When words fall short
and flowers fail...
(because they aren't good enough
for the likes of you)
then what you have on your hand
is a full-blown romance!
Dance?
Author notes
29 words..
A contest entry
- Make me want MORE by Suzanne Dia.
1000 points, ended October 30, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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lol
funny how we always want what we can't have, yes?
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oh yeah let's dance!!! 1 poem with 29 words...short yet sweet and very sincere...this is such a fine write!!!
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Thank you so much for the early morning smile to my day hahahaha I appreciate
:lol
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a sweet romantic piece, well done in such a limited space...Bravo!!
Martin
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Peter, hahaha, you can't handle more! hahaha just having fun with you, dear, to turn myself on hahaaha Thanks
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Ah
Thanks so much
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make me want more, i gag for more ,, romance dear pat xx pp
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