P reyed upon her love; her death was the goal
H is psyche was dark, this demon called Cole.
O ver time Cole softened as he never thought he would
E vil heart giving way more strongly to good.
B ut though he loved Phoebe, their love involved suffering
E scaping one's evil nature is not an easy thing.
A ll through their relationship, Cole struggled against his darker side
N ever wanting to hurt her even as he manipulated and lied
D emonic side took over as he became Belathazor
Coldly fought for Phoebe's soul, but her sisters fought more.
O nce his bride, once doomed, once dark underworld queen
L eft to grieve after vanquishing him to places unseen.
E pic love of good and evil, ultimately fated to end.
Author notes
the first option- phoebe and cole
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I really like this one. It was darkly beautiful. Great job. Keep it up.
love your ap mommy
aka:marissa rae
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This is a great acrostic write. You portrayed their love well, although you made him seem more evil than he really is. Thanks for entering and best wishes
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