Hate is what I feel for you,
But love is also somewhere too.
I hate that I love you more than everything,
But for you I'd do anything.
I hate your habits and your temper,
But I love you and will leave you never.
I hate being told I don't do anything right,
But I love the way you hold me at night.
I hate your opinions and your views on some things.
But when I'm around you, my heart sings.
I hate that we fight, I hate that you lie.
But I love you, can you answer me why?
I hate I can't be happy,
I love that you will never leave me.
I hate that we probably won't be together.
I hate that we will never experience forever.
I love the time that we have left,
You love me and for that I'm blessed!
Author notes
A work in progress!
option 5
A contest entry
- HATE by lesbian-in-love.
565 points, ended November 5, 2007, 47 entries
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Love and hate fits real good right now
Great write!!Good luck in my contest.
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Excellent Poem Good Luck In Girlish's Contest
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:)
A love/hate relationship
Always interesting to hear!
I love the rhyme in this poem
Excellent
Good luck in my contest
From Jaz <3 -
A great take on hate, combining it with love. Like they say we hurt the ones we love the most and just cos we love them we don't have to like them. Good luck!
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Wow. Love and hate together. Not quite what I was expected but I am glad you entered it because it is good. I love the way it flows. Thanks for entering the contest and good luck.
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