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Night Shade

The night
Calls out to me
Like never before
The moon;
Beaming-
Feeding my illness
With its intensity
Knows what I do not…
And yet,
What it is
I do not know
Insidiously pumps
Celestial venom 
Through my veins
Still,
Its power Crumbles
Then thins
Once it has felt
The cold beneath my skin.

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#26-moonlight

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  • Tarja
    February 5, 2008

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    Congrats on the bronze and honorable mention trophies. This had divine and exquisite word choice, the imagery could have been more deep and vast but it's better than many I have received so far. Thanks so much for entering and good luck.


  • Xx Secrets xX
    February 1, 2008
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    Great Write! Thanks for entering and good luck!


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    January 27, 2008

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    This is good. Very vivid imagery. Thank you for entering and good luck to you

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**


  • N e a r
    January 27, 2008
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    Whoa. This is so crammed with vivid expressions and hidden meanings, and it just entices me. I especially like this part:
    "Knows what I do not…
    And yet,
    What it is
    I do not know"
    Nicely worded, great entry.

    Thanks for entering your write at A N Y T H I N G ~ G O E S ! Good luck!



    M a r l u x i a


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    November 22, 2007
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    this is a nicely written piece, thanks for the entry

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