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Glass Waltz

There are holes in your heart
where you cling to disease
in the shadows of comas
Bleeding deep while dancing on glass
Omens taste like blood stains
It's just entertainment

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30 words

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  • Suzanne Dia
    October 30, 2007

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    I really like most of the language that you've used here. You've given an interesting twist to something that might otherwise be cliched. Thanks so much for entering.


  • Danna Hobart
    October 16, 2007
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    This feels very Halloween to me.