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Yearning In Delight

 

 

Yearning In Delight

By: Mrs. Lady Enthralling

 

 

 

Yes I am

Eager in

Anticipation so

Restless to hear your sensual

Noise

In my ears

Never reject my

Generosity to live

 

Inside my walls of

Niagara Falls

 

Dive in to the cleavage of my breast and let me be your side

Effects that excite your

Lighting bulbs to release

Iliamna Lakes

In repeat birth

Get explicitly naughty and pause your

Hasty tongue up against mines for cravings of strawberries that are so

T

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© Julia L. Clark Registration Number Txu 1 - 259- 764, All rights reserved

 

 

 

 

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  • sleepingINblackRain
    November 6, 2007

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    Delcious poem, i enjoyed it, but it seems to be lacking the passion behind it. as if it is just floating above the passion that is under the surface.
    Thanks for entering


  • Tattboyspet
    October 18, 2007
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    I have read this one and re-read it and re-read it again ... eventually the third time I got the story behind it ... lol!
    Your alignment and the abrupt stop at the end of the line took a great deal away from this write, but all in all it's a very sensual read, thank you for your entry


  • Brazos silver member
    October 17, 2007

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    Beautiful Julia

    I loved the way you presented this acrostic.

    Very sensual, very sexual, very...tasty? Give me some of those strawberries, baby.

    I love you,
    B.


    • Mrs LadyEnthralling
      October 17, 2007
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      you dont love me and i just fucken love you if i give you some strawberries will u love me then


  • AddictiveTRUTH
    October 16, 2007

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    Loved the Acrostics Fade

    got it going on, Lovie...absolutely.
    Sensual and delicious all in the same.
    Well done, and all my best in the contest.

    e


  • darell
    October 16, 2007

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    Sensually inviting!

    A scrumptious exploration into the passion
    of sexual yearning. A sweet and delightful
    write that stirs the imagination with wonder
    and ecstasy. Yummy yummy yummy!

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