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~* Bubbles of Intoxication *~

 

 

 

 

You speak of adulation, a feather floating 
into my palms opened with acceptance
of what your hope chest has to offer.

I don't argue nor agree
but breathe in fumes from your Spirit;
let the lines of intoxication
answer for me through coiled rings.

My heart flutters with intensity,  imagining
our collective creativity intertwined
by the intangible,  tangible when touched.

Granules of sands,  slipping into hourglass
we shaped with fingers overlapped.

Separation popped bubbles blown gently 
releasing sounds of sighs
to echo our commitment.

You speak without speech from parted lips
and move me naturally with cohesiveness
when flesh reunites with its second skin
to consummate spiritual matrimony.



 

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-Don't use the word "Love" in the poem. In the title it is allowed.
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  • Swan song gold member
    October 28, 2007

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    This was like taking a hot bath and falling into dreams to visit the one you love and desire.
    So lovely a write so so very good!

  • the chase
    October 21, 2007
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  • Virgoan
    October 21, 2007

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    Love intoxicates whether we like it or not. The way you said the lines and created the refined imagery makes the readers realize the essence of love. At a point.

    Excelent write fellow poet

    Keep writing and best of luck.

    VIRGOAN


  • thepoetssoul
    October 17, 2007

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    Wow this is so beautiful
    Great imagery and flow
    Lovely wording indeed
    Best of wishes to you

    Tony


  • Mari Goes gold member
    October 17, 2007

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    this one, my dear, has a soft and sweet flow. The thoughts are wonderful, and shows deep love.
    'You speak without speech from parted lips' what a beautiful line!
    I immensely enjoyed this poem


  • Amera gold member
    October 17, 2007

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    Beautiful! I'm such a sucker for love poems and you my friend penn them with such class and image. This is smooth and sensual. Wonderful!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • HaleyMary
    October 16, 2007

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    This is beautiful, Desire. The emotion is expressed very well in this piece. The part of the heart fluttering made me think of how the heart beats quicker when a person feels in love. The last line was good, too. It made me think of how love can be exist on a spiritual connection, as well. Best of luck in the contest.


  • penman gold member
    October 16, 2007

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    Excellent

    Oh my sweetness, this is so increadible. Such a powerful and touching piece from your golden pen. Best of luck in the contest.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    October 16, 2007

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    Amazing. Just freaking awesome. So beautifully written. You leave me speechless... Best of luck to you in the contest.

    Jeannie


  • StarEyes
    October 16, 2007

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    Hey Girl,

    This is beyond words! Sounds like, well Oh never mind.... hehe. Very familiar to me! What a great job on this one!

    Best of luck in this contest!!

    and love

    Nettie

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