Scavengers-
(in fancy suits)
stripping the bones
of a corpse that's barely cold.
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A contest entry
- Make me want MORE by Suzanne Dia.
1000 points, ended October 30, 2007, 27 entries
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thats some people in our goverment if you ask me
deep poem
hope you win the contest
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This is very effective - the image is sure bold - cold pertain to many scavengers, human ones included. Liked the flow and the brevity of the lines.
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Excellent imagery here pal. You left me wanting more. Haven't seen you around in a while. How've you been?
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I swear...I will start stalking you if you don't IM me with your latest piece, man! Really!
I like this piece and how it's like spicy food: the first bite kicks burns the mouth, stomach, and every other part of the body before you can eat the rest of it.
Great work. I wish you all the best!!!!!
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ITS WONDERFUL WHAT YOU SAY WITH A FEW WELL PICKED WORDS GREAT WRITING ALEX (: BEST OF LUCK IN THIS CONTEST
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What a tease! Gimme more, more, more. Well done and good luck.
jill -
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Very sharp like a splash of cold water in the face. The first thing I thought of was the movie Devil's Advocate and 'high sociaety' people, then I thought about real scavenger birds and death...
You've made me want more, good luck in the contest.
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hot damn
I like this a lot.
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