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Remembrance of My Death

Around, all around, the mourners gather.
My dread grows as the dagger of your words falls against my heart.
It crushes me, and darkly my essence drips to the cold, uncaring tombstones.
In my madness I dance, while the Reaper takes my hand.
Now alone, my soul falls upon uncaring eyes.

This is my salvation

Darlky gothic

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  • Funeral Ballerina
    October 28, 2007

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    Beautiful words to describe death... The details and the brilliance of your imagination is extrodinary...

    Amazing!


  • malevolent
    October 19, 2007

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    Awesome write!

    My dread grows as the dagger of your words falls against my heart.

    Now that is just one of the best lines I've read.

    Great job on this!


  • Crazy-Teddy666
    October 18, 2007
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    sweet write.your not going to kill yourself are you lol jk


  • colorxmyxworld
    October 16, 2007
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    WOW!!!!

    This is really good
    me loves it
    Keep writing
    *high five*