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It's all an act

She listen's frankly

She never lies or cheat

She never has been in detention before

She is a good girl

 

She always follow the rules

She has always been in school

She's always the quite one in class

She is a good girl

 

She never criticizes nor judge

She never the one to leave such a grudge

She always knows what to say

She is always a good girl anyway

 

Then one day she disappeared

People wondered where she went

Over the office, they heard it all

She killed herself at the mall

 

Once they heard the call

Everyone wondered why this happened at all

She was such a good girl

She never whined or cryed in school

How could she have kill herself at the mall??

 

Once everyone knew that this has happened

The office made another announcement

They all met in the gym

The office finally told them what really happened

 

She killed herself because she lost someone very close to her

Noone never knew how much she meant to her

She was dead the night it happened

Everyone thought that she was a good girl

 

Now everyone knew her pain inside

She finally killed herself a week after her mom had died

Once that was how

There's more to come

There's some more lies she never said

 

She drank that night ( 4 shots of whiskey,4 shots of vodka,4 shots of gin)

She smoked that night too

Many thought, this is the type of person who never did this to take away the pain in sin

She once never camed back that same night

She took a knife, and sliced her life

 

Many thought she was a good girl at heart

Many never knew she took awayed the pain

Until that very same day

She was still afraid of her ways

 

It was all just an act

To protect herself from other poeple

Who ever judged her and made fun of her

She was always the quite one

She was never misunderstood

 

She took away her life

JUst like that

Noone who ever knew, she'd hide it with a laugh

It was all just an act

She was always a good girl

But never, no more

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

most of its true...bout me neways(see...im still alive)
plz...enjoy

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  • ixtli
    June 30, 2008
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    Wow. This pretty dark. I kind of like it though. It isn't the typical kind of dark poetry. It's true...I'm one of those "good girls" and I nearly drove myself mad for a while...but then I slowly got through it. This is a great poem. Good luck in the contest and thanks for entering!


  • crystallynnbradford
    November 8, 2007
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    very dark...ver emo...very fucking lovin it! this piece just has that stand out emotion to it and it's not all that cliche suicide crap..this is a very well written piece and it has that certain umph to it....i loved this piece a lot....thanks for entering and good luck in the contest


  • The13thAngel
    November 3, 2007
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    wow, this is really good.
    its so sad and full of emotion.
    well done, much love x


  • badddgirl
    October 24, 2007
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    So full of emotion!

    Wow this is so sad, I am crying. Thanks for entering such a personal piece and if you ever wanna talk sweetie, please message me.

    Many thought she was a good girl at heart

    Many never knew she took awayed the pain

    Until that very same day

    She was still afraid of her ways