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Unfinished.


Splatter your feelings onto this page
This paper of unending space
Into a place where everything is assuaged
And uneeded feelings are replaced

Deep into your own world of peace
When paper and pen is all you need

Done for my Creative Writing Class on October 16th 2007

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  • ietachie
    October 16, 2007

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    That is a cool poem. I never thought about that. Just needing a pencil and a piece of paper. you did a terrific job on this poem.