Winds whisper,
the birds broadcast,
and the sky speaks;
witnesses to your crime
of malice and betrayal.
Withering away like
a neglected flower;
fetal position sighs
escape betrayed lips.
Author notes
Word Count: 29
A contest entry
- Make me want MORE by Suzanne Dia.
1000 points, ended October 30, 2007, 27 entries
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I like this poece you have done a very nice job with it.They last stanza is just great I like the whole poem though
Best wishes
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I really like this piece it is a very good write. Keep up the wonderful work and the great penning!
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Yes, see now I want to know more of the story..
thank you
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