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The Quicker Way

Previously the apple of his eye but now she's his nothing.
So she wears her heart on her sleeve.
Idly wandering, heart outstretched
ready to hand it over to another;
broken hearts mend crooked, yet quicker this way.

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  • HeavenScent4U
    October 17, 2007

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    cool take on the picture. "broken hearts mend crooked, yet quicker this way" that is a VERY unique line, i really like it thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 16, 2007

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    SUCH TALENT :D

    Oh this is a good take on the prompt.I like it alot you did a fine job with this good luck to you in the contest.Best wishes and much love