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She's Waiting

Strumming away the pain trying to forget about you;
Gorgeous face now adorned in black streaks,
waiting to put you to justice for the pain you caused.
Crouched on the floor feeling vulnerable, she
waits in fetal position to transfer her pain to you.

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  • HeavenScent4U
    October 17, 2007

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    now if that isn't a big WABAM to him nice emotion here.i love the last two lines thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 16, 2007

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    This is a good piece .I would not be the one she is waiting for.Thanks for sharing this goodluck to you in the contest.Best wishes and much love