It was never his intention
to deceive
yet
the word deceive
left me
tempted
to want more.
Author notes
17 words
A contest entry
- Make me want MORE by Suzanne Dia.
1000 points, ended October 30, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Engraved
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Whoa. Mind-blowing...truly leaves the reader asking for more...
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Whoa. Mind-blowing...truly leaves the reader asking for more...
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the centering would have been okay, it makes sense with the words here.
I love the self destructive appeal of this -
I'm making an acception on left alignment here
1. because it's MY contest and I can
2. because I don't know if this would read the same if it wasn't centered.
I like it. Dark and tasty and I am thinking beyond the words you have here.Word count in notes please. Sorry, gotta stay to my original rules and regulations :P
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