I feel my soul seep
the way a flower wilts
in slow motion.
Maybe it’s time
to wash these dreadlocks
out of my hair.
Author notes
24 words
A contest entry
- Make me want MORE by Suzanne Dia.
1000 points, ended October 30, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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You certainly have talent
I live in a part of the world where dreadlocks are the fashion, I feel sure that you are certainly not a Rastafarian, Good luck in the contest
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Excellent take on the prompt. Really enjoyable read, best to you in the contest ~blessings always~
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I love the dreadlocks...nice.
Makes me think of how much I'm tempted to get my hair braided
A lovely entry. Thank you. -
I'm definitely left wanting more with this piece. A nice, easy-going write.
Best wishes in the contest.
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Very well done, it leaves me hanging on the edge, wishing for more :-). It opens it up to the reader to so many different possiblities of what could follow.
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i liked how different this was!
hmmm me thinks i have competition!
lol
soul seep... my favorite part
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such dry humor you have in class
a good short piece
Tamara
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I'm glad you got it.
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Yes. Thank you for reading the rules,
And thank you for giving what I asked for as well.
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