How to describe her...
Her smile teach the stars to shine,
Even the moon is jealous of her eye's radiance,
and every kiss is velvet electricity...
Come descriverla...
Il suo sorriso insegna le stelle per lucidare,
anche la luna è jealous di radiance del suo occhio
ed ogni bacio è elettricità del velluto..
the ways she speaks,
she makes my world melt into a warm and caring place,
in her arms...
i sensi che parla,
trasforma il mio mondo fondersi un posto caldo e preoccupantesi,
nelle sue armi...
Every whisper lingers on my ears,
and every glance draws me close.
Even the tiniest movement from her,
stirs the deepest affection I've ever felt...
Ogni bisbiglio lingers sui miei orecchi
ed ogni occhiata lo disegna vicino.
Anche il movimento più molto piccolo da lei,
mescola l'affetto che più profondo abbia ritenuto mai...
She is the light in the dark,
the hope of my lonely soul,
and my forever love...
È la luce nell'oscurità,
la speranza della mia anima sola
e mio per sempre ami...
Author notes
I love italian. it's the language of love.
A contest entry
- Make Me Fall in Love... by trista.
450 points, ended October 20, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Too much italian?
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This is really sweet and I love the way you did a bilingual poem. Do you speak Italian fluently? Yeah, like I said, so beautiful and very vivid. Great work, bro!
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this is awesome! great write! i wish i could speak more than one language.
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See, now you've got the other girls swooning over you!!!
This was so beautiful!!! Even the Italian (which I didn't understand) sounded amazing. I love you sooo much!!!
Always,
Cassie
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It's times like this I'm really sad that I've never learned another language. I am curious which language you originally wrote this in? I can't comment of the Italian part of it, but the English version is lovely. Clear and concise thoughts are woven with a very uplifting message. I enjoyed reading this and thank you for your entry in the contest. Best of luck to you.
~J.
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*swoons* Nice. Italian. I have no idea if it's even right but I believe you.
SO romantic.
-Dlvvanzor
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