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The Future (Revelations Part II)

We're going to have a little girl.
She'll have a good life because you taught her with your love.
She's going to be so pretty and find a good husband.
She's going to grow up to be important..... Everything we wanted.
People will see her and say, "She's so pretty like her momma."
And then I'll smile and say, "That's the God-given truth."

There'll be that business, you know the one I'm talking about.
It'll be nice and nestled into the place and people will love it.
You'll be the best there ever was.
Our dreams will come true.
People will see us and say, "They. They did it right. How lucky, how blessed."
And then I'll smile and say, "That's the God-given truth."

There's going to be a little boy.
He's going to be strong, a protector type, but still in touch with his soft side.
He's going to be everything he could be, never settling for second.
He's going to grow up and kiss you in front of his friends at the high school.
People will see him and say, "His mother did it so well."
And then I'll smile and say, "That's the God-given truth."

There'll be a nice little house, cozy and warm.
It's going to be welcoming and loving.
There'll be that nice little cottage with pets, all the best.
There'll be a rosebush and flowers, no stickers or weeds.
People will see it and say, "They're living with love, what a dream."
And then I'll smile and say, "That's the God-given truth."

Time will pass and wrinkles will etch themselves on.
And people have died and others been born.
And memories don't fade, and love still remains.
Deep and fiery and passionate as ever had been before.
We'll look back and see our lives and say, "We did our best and it turned out great."
And then I'll smile and say, "That's the God-given truth."

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  • Misery into Melody
    December 1, 2007

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    you know these kinda make me jealous.
    0.0
    i don't think i'll be able to get through these without sobbing
    lol
    nice work
    i have like no points cause im doing a contest
    but....
    *applause applause applause*


  • MarriedToTheDevil
    October 17, 2007

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    i think that everyone should be like that

    and thats the God-given truth!

    gmoowe


  • tjj
    October 16, 2007
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    thats a good poem only if the world did end up like that it would be awsome

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 16, 2007

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    This is just a very beautiful piece you have written.I dont think I have ever seen a sweet write from a male poet on here so yeah to you huggles


  • -CrimsonTears-
    October 16, 2007
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    awww baby...i love this so much....you did such a great job....i love it and i love you...so much...thank you baby......are you sure everything will be ok....

    • Eots
      October 16, 2007
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      I am positive. (lol, have to say it, it popped into my head) It's a girl. ()_()



      Lol.
      But yesh. I am sure.

      ~Asa of the Poets of Certainty.

      • -CrimsonTears-
        October 16, 2007
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        but remember i want to adopt kids...

        i hope so....

        -Chelsea [ok i wont finish this...lol...i'm just teasing you baby...][i love you]

        • Eots
          October 16, 2007
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          Who said they weren't adopted?
          I know.


          ;P you teaser....



          ~Asa of the Poets of Joy

          • -CrimsonTears-
            October 16, 2007

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            ok i guess your right...lol....

            you know i like teasing you....lol....hahaha....

            and you know i have been waiting to hear something from you....it's been *looks at one hand* *looks at the other* 10 seconds....lol

            • Eots
              October 16, 2007

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              HAHA!! You're funnnnny.... hee hee...
              You make me chortle.
              Hehe.....


              I love you.

              ~Asa of the Poets of Running Out of Names


              • -CrimsonTears-
                October 16, 2007
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                gezzzz you finally come around....

                i thought you forgot about it....

                what your favorite girls/boys names

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