Bedroom dances on your mind,
on my heart his name you'll find,
it's tattered, ripped, and open bare,
because of you, i hope you're aware
but i'll mend, as mine and another's hearts will blend
Author notes
prompt: http://i23.tinypic.com/2i0x3t2.jpg
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired by HeavenScent4U.
600 points, ended October 18, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Gorgeous,the rhyming is cute and simple;the piece....an overall winner...
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Thanks!!
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very nice as sad as this sounds, i love the sadness in this, it's so fitting for the picture. thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed
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Thanks. It's from the heart.
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Awe, painful yet lovely <3
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Thanks, love.
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