you say your cold heart's made of stone;
you hide your love and live alone...
I try getting close, but you build a wall;
love in a small dose; you just need to crawl...
give me a chance to open your heart;
come on let's dance; where else should we start??
once you're able to let your love out;
atop the mountains you'll hear me shout...
you need not live your life alone;
i'll prove your heart's not made of stone...
take care of us and love me tender;
devotion to you I will render...
A contest entry
- Make Me Fall in Love... by trista.
450 points, ended October 20, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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First off, welcome to AP! I love to see poets new to the site in my contests, and I hope you'll enjoy as many happy hours here on AP as I have.
I really enjoyed the simplicity of this poem. It brings across a clear message, and one I'm sure many can relate to. Stone-cold hearts so often come from heartbreak, and I've always believed a new love is the best cure for that.
Thank you for a lovely entry, and good luck to you in the contest.
~J.
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Ew loves this write. Full of love,devotion, and caring. Great write, flows beautifully. nicely done.
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