Fingertips circle and touch
the tip ends
meld together
as the eye looks through
finding amazing images~
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired by HeavenScent4U.
600 points, ended October 18, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow I love the spin on this one. I had to come and find one I have not read yet. When I click on return the favor it brought me to one I all ready read. I love this one. It simple and very creative. I would not of thought of these words. Great work. Thinking of you today.
Have a wonderful day my friend.
love your sis Brenda
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interesting
Well it describes the picture. Doesn't move me honestly, but it's a rather different kind of piece. -
Very cool
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Beautiful!!
Love this one Sis
Power exudes from Your pen~~
Wooooooooo Hooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!!
Many blessings to You in the contest
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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very nice. i love the title and i love the metaphor within your words. well done. thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed
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Cool take on the pix
Well written imagery.
I remember as a kid we would hold our fore fingers together in front of our eyes and look past them. We would see a little hot dog. Your poem reminded me of this. Silly i KNOW, BUT IT STILL WORKS, lol
thanks for the write and the memory jog.
Buddy
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Susan, I like the use of imagery in this. It is also very metaphoric. Oh, the things that can be seen.
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very creative
This is an interesting poem sis. Your interpretation of the picture is excellent, and the title of the poem is really unique.
Good luck in the contest!
Love & Hugs,
Jeannette 
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ah, reminds of Tess trying to get a photo of the sun between her fingers
Very good imagery here Susan!
Mari
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Interesting interpretation of the pic', Sis!
Good Luck in the contest!
Love,
Maureen
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"the tip ends meld together" nice phrasing.
You describe the image well.
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Excellent
Oh my sis what a poem for the picture. Great job. Best of luck in the contest.
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A unique title! "finding amazing images" through a bird's eye view is always intriguing for me. All the best in the contest, darlin'! Luv & hugs, ♥ Belle
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Wonderful
Great Job sissy. Short and to the point, Good word choice. an you used them well. Great work
*Go with God* my sweet sister,
Valerie
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images always speaks as to what it stands for,you spoke very well of the formation in penmenship., good luck in the contest...MM
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Happiness!
A really fine poem that speaks of our lives as we try to make sense of the world. Your poetry always makes me smile and admire.
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