Love with you is heaven
It puts a smile upon my face
The way you look and talk to me
I go to that special place
My place is full of waterfalls
And a sun that shines so bright
A bird constantly sings for you
I am filled with pure delight
I feel like I am floating
On white clouds in the sky
All because I love you
To write this, I cry
Because......
I don’t know how to tell you
Just what I feel inside
So day by day I work away
And hold the love I have inside
Should I tell you in a letter?
Or maybe with a song
What about a poem?
Or would that take to long?
Should a write it on a post it
Or send you it by mail
Should I phone your private number
If all the above fails?
I just want to scream it
Get it of my chest
To say you are my world
That I love you the best
I touch myself thinking
Just what you'd do to me
Me naked, your hands exploring
It sets my minds thoughts free
So does......
The thought of your lips touching mine
It makes my knees go weak
When you stare with those eyes, pass me a smile
I find it hard to speak
One day I will tell him
Unleash the fantasies inside
For that day I cannot wait
Because my love will no longer have to hide
A contest entry
- Show Me How by Paulies Cracker.
430 points, ended November 6, 2007, 25 entries
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wow this is by far my favourite, it's a really excellent poem, did u end up telling him or what?
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as far as Love poems go, this is excellent. I Like it.
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AWWW!! this is sooooo CUTE!! i know EXACTLY how this feels!! i feel it right now!! i'm totally in love with this guy and he has no idea how crazy i am about him! thank you soo much for this!! good luck!
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u liked him for long? it does my head in because i am currently in a new relationship but i work with this guy and i totally cant get him out my head and when i see him i go weak etc.... to be honest i dont even no if he notices me, or if he would like what i dream about
i will tell him tho 1 day x
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Should a write it on a post it -> Should (I) write it
Been there, done that, sux. Don't know why it happens exactly, but you captured it well, very well.
Great job!
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