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A Poet finds love in the Strangest Places

 

 

 

Why do I love you?
Why do you ask?
Did you not see the green winter I saw
while summer was white with snow?
Did you not see the loneliness
that covered me during the heights
of our time together?


Let me tell you of love
of the sandstone and silica
in its hourglass, the shape of woman
unfolds to man

and loneliness spurns on the edge of spring.
I am not blinded to the
midnight
snowstorms.


I cannot give the ferryman passage.
Love is Janus head
pillow smashed
come upon, histories of fear.


No rides in the boat.
Not till dues paid.
This prayer will be wished
when love has collected
taxes from man and beast alike.
I shall be a sinner at the gates, pounding the wrought iron
railings of words that love has crushed upon me
allowed me to open, the seams of winter,
and eternal summer, licks upon my heels.


Love creaks like floorboards.
softer shoe on this cobbled life
it has no bearing on the heaviness
of water, or the thickness of a muddied belly
laying flat on the slow running river of your mind.
love is a scream of surprise, when morning comes
itching through the curtains,
breathing a lighter note from previous life times

of hands pulsing over thighs, eyes alight and the twist

in my breasts.
I have never thought of age
until your words, made music
like Sibelius

etched inscriptions on the waves,
that disappear on eve of my existence.

 

 





 

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  • poet2angels gold member
    October 21, 2007

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    This is so beautiful...
    I almost felt as if I shouldn't be reading it...so emotional and personal...touching and gorgeous..
    I am a romantic and lover of only amazing love poems...This leaves me in awe...

    Lynda


  • FindingFaith
    October 19, 2007
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    This is lovely. Thank you.

  • Anybodys-guess
    October 19, 2007

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    I don't know, but this felt like a love letter from one mature person to another mature person. All the turned around season stuff and the memory of love, sort of muted in passion, but the passion still smolders. Just the way I felt this. I like it though, kinda makes me wonder what my life will be like one day. Later, AG


  • Ariosto II. gold member
    October 18, 2007

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    Bravo!

    As good a love poem as ever I have read.

    last stanza could stand alone abd still be the best love poem I have ever read.


  • cvillelisa
    October 18, 2007

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    Of all your latest - this appeals to me the most. It is not so personal that I squiggle but rather almost has a distant feeling to it. The last few lines are exquisite.

    I have a book of Love Letters mostly written by poets and writers, this could fit right in.

    Don't mind me if I don't comment on all the others, I'm reading but sometimes I am uncomfortable commenting on such very personal poems (mostly because I tend to read with my critical eye) and that eye doesn't belong on love letters.

    Lisa



  • Night Hope gold member
    October 16, 2007

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    "I shall be a sinner at the gates, pounding the wrought iron
    railings of words that love has crushed upon me
    allowed me to open, the seams of winter,
    and eternal summer, licks upon my heels."

    Sighhh...I'll be seeing you there, too, my Friend. Just beautiful. Good luck in the contest, Sweetie. Wanda


  • IronIcecream
    October 16, 2007

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    between eclectic and commune
    sparks of hunger
    of wish to drown in pools of liquid soul
    cold feet and words to warm
    the need of height
    aware of depthless and bellow


    love isn’t habit
    but being part of ~
    while becoming other



  • Darianna
    October 16, 2007

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    *Sigh*

    I wish I could write about love the way you so effortlessly seem to do. It's one of the subjects I just can't seem to feel at home writing about.

    *sigh* but this is so...lovely. I don't know how else to describe it really. It's like you have taken a blank page and let your romantic notions run wild with out any hinderance. Truly inspiring!

    HUGS, Dari xxx

  • Rowan gold member
    October 16, 2007

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    wow~ I'm in awe.
    Standing up and applauding.
    wow. Did I say that already?


  • Peteskid gold member
    October 16, 2007

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    lovely, a classical overtone to my reading, most appealing, love in the meaning of life, life in the flow of time...so very well done...PK


  • michael thomas gold member
    October 16, 2007

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    Life happens in vignettes. Love turns them into other-worldly escapes from the mundane to the germane, from the heart to the heavens and back with reports of visages and hints at enlightenment that raises the Buddha's eyes from his writings to smile and wave the lovers back to sleep with gentleness.


  • misselaineous
    October 16, 2007
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    ahhhh, sigh
    more loveliness


  • ca ne fait rien
    October 16, 2007

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    Ah this is more like it. I can't be doin' with word rationing when it comes to a poet like you with much to convey , much to show the world. You let it burgeon here like a hydrangea that found the right soil.


    • NurseChilly gold member
      October 16, 2007
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      my little garden is drowned today.... but the soil is still good...



      thankie kind sir

  • Suzanne Dia
    October 16, 2007

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    You need a new collection: Floorboards - I love that makes it into these poems. I love the sound of feet on floorboards reminding me I'm not alone, even when I feel lonely.

    Ok on to this:

    "I shall be a sinner at the gates, pounding the wrought iron
    railings of words that love has crushed upon me"

    God I love those lines, Gill. They breathe the ache of love. I love that you are never all hearts and bubbles, you show what love really is. It's a double edged blade, and you put it in such a way that cliches don't catch in my throat and make me gag.

    Yes.

    That's it.

    This is gritty, I'll have you know. It's beautiful and raw.

    Love becomes you.

    • NurseChilly gold member
      October 16, 2007
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      ...... tsk woman, you'll be having me coming over all unnecessary... !! hahhahah

      gagging isn't nice in the mornings... so unladylike..


      thankie girl...


  • EvilKate
    October 16, 2007
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