a flowering rose stands alone
next to a kindled flame
my heart keeps beat softly
of a song sung only for you
but never did you care for the rose
the fire i kindled on my own
the song would never be a duet
but the heart is always yours
one day i found
the rose had been moved
you stabbed my heart with a rose
the rose is dyeing
the fire still burns for you
and where the blood of my heart rests
a new rose grew
my heart is mended
a rose bud appeared
not for you, for another
your fire still burns
but ours we are building
not alone, together
my blood still cry’s for you
but my love (right now) is another’s
Author notes
snickerdoodles
option 5
A contest entry
- Show Me How by Paulies Cracker.
430 points, ended November 6, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what dose it make you feel
Comments
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I really do enjoy your writing. But you need to think about something else and use it's power to write as well. Just think about the better things that come your way. Like ME! HA!
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Powerful!
This is very good! You have a way with words; I felt your emotions with this one. Beautilfully written!
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oh wow this was soooooo good!!! if you could, please tell me which option you chooosed?? that would be great!! thank you so much and good luck!
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