You told me you cared and loved me
You told me I'm a precious treasure
Said you’d cherish our friendship
Hold on to it so tight it can’t slip away
Said I owned a unique place in your heart
And no one replace that reserved spot
But apparently these were just words
Which were carelessly blurted out
And apparently your grip wasn’t tight enough
Because you let me slip away so easily
A contest entry
- heartbreak by live in love.
500 points, ended November 8, 2007, 56 entries
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Comments
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This is such a sad piece. So painful to read, dear. I have been there...in the same situation, and all I can say is that it sucks.
There is so much depth in your words. SO much unbearble pain that is so easy to relate to. I loved the way you wrote this. Honestly, it's awesome.
Take care
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