I was walking through the park last night
When he came up behind me and gave me a fright
I was so scared I could hardly breathe
Hearing his voice I was almost relieved
I knew he was a lover of mine
His exciting ways I find divine
His voice seductive against my ear
He whispered so quietly I could hardly hear
My hands behind me high up my back
He was pushing me towards the toilet shack
There were people around and they could see
Exactly what he was doing to me
He rubbed his hands up my thighs
I couldn’t contain my excited sighs
He bent me over, across the basin
He didn’t care which way I was facing
I heard some voices, approaching near
I tried not to moan, so they couldn’t hear
He covered my eyes, told me not to look
I could barely think as my body shook
Using fingers he pushed deep inside
With three or four he opened me wide
Panting fast as orgasm begins
I try to hold back or he knows he wins
Someone enters to use the loo
He asked them if they want some too
An extra hand touched me there
They’re roaming over me everywhere
Someone bites hard on my lips
When I feel my clothes start to rip
I’m pushed down lower upon my knees
His reaches down and his cock, he frees
I feel with lips across his knob
Looks like he wants a good head job
Another cock comes from behind
Whatever he’s seeking I’m sure he’ll find
One going in, one going out
This is what it’s all about
My body shakes I feel my pussy clench
Love it when he calls me wench
His orgasm close, he holds my head
Pulls out and comes on my back instead
The other man is buried deep
With each shove he makes me weak
He cums with an almighty shout
And then he finally pulls it out
My lover true, promised me something new
I never guessed this is what he’d do
I walk often now into the night
Waiting for new delights
I never know what he next will do
And you will have to wait now too
Author notes
Option 4 sex in public toilets
snickerdoodles
A contest entry
- Show Me How by Paulies Cracker.
430 points, ended November 6, 2007, 25 entries
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WOW, this was really good. the flow and the rhymes, you really pulled this together in a fashion that made the reading very enjoyable. great job
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Oh yes you are so naughty. Good job with the rhymes sometimes I think its harder to make a write like this rhyme then to just do free verse. Excellent job. Very Erotic images and descriptions, nicely done. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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I'd have to say, this is one of the only rhyming poems I very much fancied. Great job!
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lol, you are a dirty girl!! You definately capture the mood. A suggestion: clean-up the very first 3 lines(make them tighter), this would then sharpen the opening scene.
Love
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mmmm naughty but so very hot
nicely done Jen
Roses to you
Teresa
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oh wow this was soooo good!!! it made me laugh and think at the same time... thank you so much.... i really enjoyed it... keep up the good work!! good luck!!
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hmmmmmm....
this makes it all seem worth a trip outdoors at night. LMAO
Excellent job with this Jen.
**Master Ktulu**
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Excellente!
Bravo girl! im at work and now im all horny lol! great job xx
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Loved it!!!!
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WOOHOOOOO! Go Girl!!!!!! EXCELLENT write - I enjoyed this one THOROUGHLY!!!!!!!
hmmmm ... maybe if i send this link to Master and then start walking at night ...
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