I love you
I don't think I have ever started that way
Funny because
It's all I've ever wanted to say
I need you to know
But I can't let it show
Yeah, that sounds more like me
Just sitting back and hoping you'll see
Sometimes you just can't find
A suitable rhyme
How can you match the tone of
I need you?
All preconceived notions of what I should write
Yeah, out those go
You make me something new
You make me
Yeah, that's all I wanted to say
You make me
You make me feel real
And since I have a history of repitition
I'll say it again
The only line that matters
I love you
Author notes
Option 2. This is obviously a prewrite. I am in quite a similar (almost exact) situation as you described and that is why I wrote this poem. I hope it is what you want.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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"I love you". you're exactly rite, there's really no other way to express those words. the words we need to say most are the ones we hold back. sucks don't it? thanks for the entry!!
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cool
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awww.... this was adorable!! thank you soooo much for this ..... i really liked it and was almost crying!! good luck!
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This is a nice piece, its really sweet and tender.
Love is a many questioned thing, it comes in so many shapes and forms. it can break you down or bring you up, it can slap you in the face and trip you up, it can be the lending hand to lift you off your feet, and whisk you away, A nice little treat.
But there we go.
Lexy xxx
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