eyes
stolen from
a blazing dusk,
awake behind rays
of twilight misgivings.
she kisses
slumber's upturned
cheek,
swallowing
backward
sighs.
Author notes
inspired by hot summer evenings and yawning.
A contest entry
- PIF ~ Free choice by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended October 19, 2007, 19 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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Wow. Really a lovely piece, and I love how you used dusk in this piece... it really helped deliver a stunning image. Good job.
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Seeing things
after dark those uplifting can be a beautiful thing...even when things in life are not so much these you see in your dreams...congrate on silver
Mal
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This was very good, Wonderful imagery i could really picture this write!
Great job
~Lisa~
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thankyou very much for your comment and your applause
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Very meaningful and deeply captivating. Thanks so very much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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