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excitement

I am squatting here from the cold,knowing this is my biggest show.
I hear the chanting of my name inside,trying to let the shivers subside.
Think I will just stay here and hide.
But the music starts,and the cold goes away,I now know that i must play.
The shivers are gone oh!what a treat,the crowd i won over such a defeat.

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  • HeavenScent4U
    October 17, 2007

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    Nicely done, she does look a bit like a huddled rockstar, doesn't she? way to build the confidence and go thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed