How bright the light that shines on me
for all too blind to see;
I crave the night, its dark desires of private fires,
awaiting warm whispers of written flames... feel my name:
You capture to set me free!
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image supplied by contest holder
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired by HeavenScent4U.
600 points, ended October 18, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very interesting and unique take on the picture. i think we all have a dark side and a light and i like the darkness in this
thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed
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You've done a beautiful job of expressing an inner need, desire and yearning that we all secretly hold within us. Good luck in the contest hun.
♥ Touchof1der
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Wow. This is piece is very good.
"I crave the night, its dark desires of private fires,
awaiting warm whispers of written flames... feel my name:"
There is inner need supplied within these words and want, and the crave to be known.
Very powerful. Well done. ~Pamela
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