Your presence is like a spotlight on my heart
it blinds me to the wrongness in the world
everything is right because of you
if I lost you, my world would end
but, because you shine, I can always find you
Author notes
also inspired from http://xkcd.com/40/
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired by HeavenScent4U.
600 points, ended October 18, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Short and wonderful. This poem makes my insides warm
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Very nice. "Your presence is like a spotlight on my heart
it blinds me to the wrongness in the world" i like this in the aspect that someone can open someone else's eyes so much. great take on the pic. thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed
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short,sweet, moving!
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