A PATIENT HEART
Beautiful brown eyes searching for answers,
longing to see the future before her.
Inhaling the universe and all of its glory,
learning to have a patient heart.
She exhales slowly and waits in silence.
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Picture Prompt
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired ll by HeavenScent4U.
600 points, ended October 18, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i have to say that this almost sounds like it could be given as a lesson or advice on living these days, at least to the younger generation. inhaling all the world has to give and exhale and have patience in things yet to come, very well said. thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed
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Kinda sounds like me...I inhale everything around me...however I don't have patience enough to wait for things...and definatley not in silence...so then again it doesn't sound like me actually. Hmmm...
I really like this though, it's really gentle and thoughtful on reading. Good luck in the contest
HUGS, Dari xxx
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wonderfully penned. almost felt the piece was for me
Yea its all about me these days...j/k great take on the prompt.
BEst wishes Tory
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