Beauty cast in rocker clothes,
Painted and ready for war,
Trapped in black and white she waits,
Straining against conformity
Ready to burst out, bringing color to the world.
Author notes
lol thanks....and I started with five lines... this is what it SHOULD have looked like.
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired ll by HeavenScent4U.
600 points, ended October 18, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i like where you took this and i happened upon one of your comments below and i have to agree about the 60's effect here
very well done. thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed
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awww wow, nice imagery. xx lexy xx
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Thanks kindly. I wasn't sure about this one really. It has been awhile since I've written something without a little rhyme scheme.
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Neat, I loved this.
When I started reading you took me to the 60's and then towards the end you brought me back to now.
Keep writing and having good ideas.
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Thanks! And you too! Though I like your poem better than mine, I'm still going to win!
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Really? Well you'll just have to wait and see.
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Yes
Yes we will. Good luck to you, though with talent like yours I'm sure you don't need it.
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