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Lifeline

Kicked and licked
with words
deeply etched by
hearts of shallow delight.

Bruised and beaten
with smiles
smoothly salted by
deeds of blunt discern.

Scraped and scared
with degrade
wrongly charged by
thoughts of profound detest.

I love you Lord
for I am in need of a lifeline…

In a list

A contest entry

Do you also feel this pain?

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  • Touchof1der silver member
    October 16, 2007

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    Your words here are goldenly spun with such delicacy I am honored to have bore witness to here! Thank you for sharing and best wishes to you in the contest. Keep that quill handy dear poet.
    ♥ Touchof1der