I’m lost, confused and feeling alone
I think it’s another relationship blown
I’m not sure which way to turn
I worry about the bridges I burn
I try to get it right but it ends in another fight
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired ll by HeavenScent4U.
600 points, ended October 18, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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So very sad
This was me. Very very sad writing. I can feel the deep emotion and frustration - also the loneliness and despair in this piece too.
Well done
Wayne
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i think all of us have felt this and it's so sad. i like your fourth line though about being worried about burning bridges thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed
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SAD
I'm sorry I didn't find this sooner, but anyway this
is good & unfornately alot of times true to life
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Nicely penned Jen Although it's sad, it says quite a lot in so few words. Well done
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Well done! Her body language does indeed portray the emotions you have written. Great job. Good luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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nice take on the pic prompt. confusition and relationships gone wrong...sadly, this is life for sure.
Everyone can relate to these feelings at one point in their lives aand most likely they will experience and suffer with these feelings many times throughout theirs live. I have too many times!!!!!
Very nice write!
Wish you the best in the contest!
Take care,
much love,
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Good take on the prompt. good luck in the contest.
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this is way better my friend ... your thoughts on that pic definitely did it justice - well done hun
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