I really want first place,
To shove it in their face,
My poems are the best;
The rest are just...the rest,
Of misery they cry,
Rhymes, well, I just sigh,
While they cry and cry,
Their sorry little tears,
As daggers to my ears,
Others deaf they hear,
Of poetry, fine and clear.
I stare and laugh, laugh and stare,
Intelligence, I know not where
to find or seek, this website lost,
Of else's work, it's naught but gloss;
Fancy words, and broken hearts,
Of those who ne'er have been tossed
Away by any loves as true,
As that which I do hold in you.
A poem such as this I know,
Is fit for nothing more than show,
I am not proud, rather defiant,
I know there is just no compliance:
No set of rules nor guides to follow,
When writing something quite so...hollow.
Author notes
yeah...this poem is complete crap
i wrote it as a joke
see my other stuff...it's undoubtedly better
A contest entry
- Make me laugh by poorme.
300 points, ended October 28, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Entertain Me by EmeraldDaze.
600 points, ended November 6, 2007, 44 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Like Gold? {Shiny, shiny;;} by l0ve.
650 points, ended August 4, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Hah.
Comments
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Lol, i love the ending to this. So.... you think you're better?
Hmmm... i'll have to think about that. ;] This is an interesting poem!
Thank you for entering~ -
This is pretty good, very entertaining. I like this a lot
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Brilliantly bad!
I think it made a refreshing change to read this. It has a good rhythmic flow to it and I found it so funny to read! If this was utter rubbish, to you, then your others must be really good! Very well put, I loved it!
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haha
I found it quite amusing actually. Everyone needs a bit of lighter stuff once in a while. Too much depressing, realistic pieces make you get stuck in that frame of mind.
Therefore, with that said, this made me smile. Thank you for sharing. =)
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