As each day passes, I close my heart.
Knowing this is all that is left of me.
One day someone will find this opening,
take the chance to fight, for I am here,
hiding my feelings and love, waitin' on you.
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A contest entry
- Pic Inspired by HeavenScent4U.
600 points, ended October 18, 2007, 19 entries
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great take on pic and so true in so many ways. I like your heartfelt emotional writes. it gives us the insight of your heart.
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Why? would be my question what is causing hurt to one so young with much to offer? no this poem is not for you.
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Wonderful
Beautiful words written across this poem.Thank you and good write!I love the picture too
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well done my dear friend my fav lines are:
One day someone will find this opening,
take the chance to fight, for I am here,
hiding my feelings and love, waitin' on you.
for the one who has captured my heart I have in turn captured his even though the future is doubtful but present is magically wonderful in every way. xx many blessings always xx
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I couldn't agree more... I love this poem
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Very nice. it's like someone who has ALMOST given up on love but not quite, still leaving that opening for the right person. thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed
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Short yet so deep
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