I am an artist,
selfish and unrealistic,
searching eternally for my muse.
I am a worker,
strong and true,
brooding for what I implore to receive.
I am a lady,
naive and elegant,
defeated by the hardship of life itself.
I am human,
inadequate and genuine,
defined by my failure and authenticity.
I am me,
original and similar,
desiring my safe haven on earth, as anyone else.
Good?
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GREAT! This is a great poem describing you, I must admit I feel a lot of these things you said is true about me as well. Simple yet powerful!
Keep it up my dear!
Hugz
Himler
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thank you~~<33
you're awesome, honestly. =)
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Fabtastic!!
This is a fab write, I would search for another contest to submit it into, it has a great chance of a trophy. Simplicity at its finest! I love the flow and honesty you have expressed, very well penned!
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I'm not sure if it would qualify for another contest....unless you had one in mind? lol
anyways, thank you again. I don't like writing things that not everyone can understand. (you know how some writers are so metaphorical you get lost in it? yeah.)
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While I can appreciate the point of the piece and the emotion that you have put in it, but you specifically did something I asked you not to -
this read more like a list, with the repetition that I was not looking for.
I am sorry, but this will be disqualified due to rules, feel free to enter again if you so choose. -
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silly me.
Sorry about that. I remember reading that rule, but when I started writing...I guess I overlooked it. Maybe I'll enter another one of your contests..if you make one.
[bows]
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