When looking on this earth
I see something that disturbs my heart.
I see misfit children reaching for love.
I see people judge by color.
I see people judge on your God.
I see people on the ideals of beauty.
I see people judge by wealth.
I see people judge by home.
I see violence and toture against other souls.
I see families riped apart just because someone's love is to an outcast.
God sees this too and so much more.
God helps the outcasts
from the ones who are teased of the size
to ones who're murder for the faith they hold.
He watches over all and helps through his servants.
He sends his saint and angel to work,
until we can see along love.
God does help the out,
but why don't we help with God's job
and help the outcast as well.
Author notes
This song title is from The Hunchback of Notre Dame
A contest entry
- What's in a name? by AngelEyes13.
300 points, ended October 29, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow! You did an amazing job with this! ^_^ I really like this song and I really like how you took the song and made such a great poem out of it! ^_^
Great Job!
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Oh wow great write. You did a marvelous job getting your point across. It's a good point. God does help the outcasts, and yeah, so should we. Thank you so much for entering my contest.
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what a nice lightly written poem! it just kinda floats with joy. this poem could use some serious revisings. its mostly the tense of a certain word. i can help you with that if you would like. if so just send me an IM saying that. overall this poem has great potential and your point and main subject is great! best wishes in the contest!! keep up the fabulous writing!!
~horsecowgirl~
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