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the best ye knew

we talked
that day
realy talked
as if all we had no' said
waited a miniture lifetime
to be told,
and i said
like i always thought
ye always were
too hard on yourself
for life isna easy
and some choices made
were ment to test
test strength,
charachter
and ye 'ave proven
ye 'ave thoes in spades
so i smile sadly
at words ye say
that ye werna
good
good for ye
good to me
and i still say
dinna second guess yourself
how ye got to where ye are
and regret?
i 'ave none
no' even the pain
because evera moment was
simply us
for aye
ours was a path
that was alredy mapped out
so
stop
dinna appologise for something
that i ken
i did from the begining
judged and deemed worth it
nay,
ye may no' 'ave loved me
like i wanted ye to
like i hoped ye would
but...
ye loved me
all the same...
the best ye knew
'tis all i ever asked for

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for k- because ye fit the way ye do
and i miss all the parts

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  • Corvus Corone
    December 19, 2007

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    LaughingHow oft we forget we cannot make someone feel or be the way we want, they can only give us what they are. This is truly a beautiful piece that remind us that we can only be ourselves. Thank you for sharing it

     

    Blessed Be

     

    Jem 


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    November 23, 2007
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    Awesome!!!


  • misselaineous
    October 16, 2007

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    this made me sad
    it is written from every bone in your body
    and read with every bone in mine

    elaine