feel trapped stuck inside
cant find a light to guide my way
cant speak or touch
dont look up or be independant
do as your told obey your restrictions
attend to your needs
be content to be alone
dont speak without permission
dont leave unless supervised
dont spend money unless i say
dont touch me or look at me
mind your own business
whats mine is mine
whats yours is mine
clean this do that
i love you
youre so stupid
who would want you
why do i bother with you
my ears are bleeding
i still hear the screaming when i cover my ears
my heart is hurting
what is this pain spreading through my body
i cant burrow deep enough
loving you is killing me
Author notes
to my friend ryan thanks for the art work
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful
Very well one. A great expression of feelings so powerfully expressed. Thank you for sharing.
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Wow
Very deep poem yet sad in a way. I like this poem. It speak in many depths -
It's very raw, so you can really taste the emotion. Your poem is powerful.
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Very powerful
a lot of undeserved restrictions really not a good place to be good luck with the situation of it is currently the one you are in, its really hard to be trapped like that when its really that your trapping yourself, you cant help loving them but its that thats keeping you there
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Very Good
The work seems to drive home the point that it is those closest to us that can hurt us the most. Those that feel free to use those ideas and ideals phrased within, can also reach in and find our tenderest parts, only to stab at it.
Lin
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