bird of paradise
bearing souls of men to earth
quiver-fulls of joy
A contest entry
- The Haiku-Patchwork Quilt Contest-Project by NoWayJo.
600 points, ended October 21, 2007, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ah, such a wonderful image you paint here...I loved the final line, made me quiver with anticipation
Good luck in this contest my friend 
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Thank you, cutiepie, for your comment! My quiver is quivering too! Blessed with two sweet grandbabies in August
I'm pleased you liked it.
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What a wonderful image portrayed from this quilt-block. Your words flowed so nicely, leaving me with a feeling of spiritual bliss. Well done!
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Thank you, mommyof2, for your lovely comment and clappies! I am so pleased you enjoyed it
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Lovely, lovely haiku, Mirthyl! I think if I were to participate in this contest, this quilt-block would have been my own choice, but I could not have written of the Bird of Paradise so well as you have by this haiku.
Thank you so much for this entry to the contest and contribution to the haiku-quilt!
Jo
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Thank you, Jo, for the encouraging comment! I thought the block was beautiful as well. What a creative and enjoyable contest you have put together! Delightful to write for
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