I can.
I can visit you anytime of any day,
decorating your grave with flowers.
I can fake a smile, tell people I’m okay,
I can laugh without crying,
for hours and hours.
I can continue doing everything,
that I use to do when you were here,
all those things that made you proud.
I can wake up in the morning,
go about my day, pretending I’m okay,
pretending that I never lost my way.
I can laugh at people’s jokes,
and feel bad for their pain.
I can stop myself from crying,
and hide before anyone can tell,
that the only thing that could make me happy now,
would be me, dying.
I can do anything that I have to do,
just to keep myself from going insane.
But whatever I try to do,
I can’t get rid of this pain.
I can’t stop missing you.
I can’t.
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was soo emotional had me in tears almost.. very sad and very well written well done
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wow this is amazing i feel your pain and emotion through thisp oem great work hun and its been ages since we talked lol
ill ttyl *hugs* 
great poem love elektra
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Wow... *BIG HUG* This was very well written hun. And I'm sorry you have to go through this... I really wish I could just give you a huge hug right now... And you are SO AMAZING! I can't thank you enough for bringing me back last night... That was awesome... Thank you so much, and great write. *hugs* Love ya hun.
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wow, i thought this was a good, but sad poem....i didnt think that it was awful...it made me think. and i think i exspecially like the last 2 sentences or parts of the poem:
I can't get rid of this pain.
I can't stop missing you.
other than that awesome writing or should i say typing. -
*holds and doesnt let go*
tis good hun, and im so sorry you feel that way. wish i could make it all better
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The whole of this poetic journey was tenderly written so full of heartfelt longing for days gone by in better times. you can feel the writers immence pain, and depth of emotion. It is a truthfull heartfelt write about the pain that accompanies the loss of a loved one in death, described so well, and hurts so much. Bravo ! Bravo! on this write and deepest sympathy, for the loss of a loved one through death. Yo have truely captured the feelings.
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