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You Never Had A Friend Like Me

I'm the kind of girl who never shuts up,
but I will enjoy a good tea cup.
I read maybe a little too often
and I sleep with a purple unicorn I soften.
I say the most random things
espically about the kings.

I can be a sloth at times,

but that when I think of these rhymes.

I don't really stand out with the crowd,

and I have know to be loud.
Still I will always try to be my best
even when it's not as great as the rest.

I will shut long enough to hear you

espically when you're really blue.

I be there when you're in trouble.

I will pop up like a big bubble.

We defintely have lots of fun
even if it's just eating hot dogs on a bun.

I pretty you will agree

you never a had a friend like me.

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  • leslielovesthomas
    November 2, 2007
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    thank you for entering and good luck!

    leslie


  • horsecowgirl
    October 21, 2007

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    ah. such a calming well thought through poem. i really liked the words you used. they are very bouncy and bubbly. your description of your self is perfect. everything is true! i really like this poem! Best wishes in the contest! Keep up the fabulous writing!
    ~horsecowgirl~


  • AngelEyes13
    October 15, 2007

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    Aladin!

    Great job! I actually was beginning to think that no one was going to enter. Thanks for proving me wrong. I like the rhyme in the poem, although I've always been a fan of rhyme. Great job, and thanks for entering my contest.