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Get Out

I just don't know why anymore.
Every day, every morning
You are there in my mind.
It gets to the point
Where I feel depressed.
I just stare out the window,
Wishing you were still there.
Just the words "I might one day"
Would stop the pain that I feel.
My heart is already taken but you,
you are still there.
The memories every morning
are becoming more than I can handle.
I'm sick of it all,
I just want it to stop.
If you won't help the pain then I'm telling you,
GET OUT OF MY HEAD!!!

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  • Lone Wolf
    February 14, 2008
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    great poem baby!!! i like it.